gavkay21's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kush Demo]

Hmmm ...

Same as the last song. Its a little messy but you've obviously put quite a effort into this.
This is better than the other song anyway and is on the right track. I can tell your influanced by justice? Am i Right?. The dubstep base is all over the place at parts but i think you can fix it with a little more tweaking.

Keep producing and don't be discourged by shitty votes you get.

scottwjsm responds:

yes i still have to do the tweaking,
im influanced by justice and skrillex,
and thanks for leaving a comment

[Hipstro Demo]

Dance X Dubstep

0.43 is where is kicks in and the drop is quite good. Did you mean to cross breed dubstep and dance?. I must adimit its doe sound messy at some parts and mabey a bit reaptive in others. I would break it down around 2.30 and then introduce a strong synth lead meldoy.
hmm kinda like this ....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2DO6Y9 _5e7A

You've proberly heard that song before btw. I like the concept but it needs some tidyng up.
Check this out for me if you want I just uploaded it.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/423075

[Fluted]

well

Meldoy is okay but for gods sake turn down the volume of the flute my ears nearly melted off

AccountableMasses responds:

Well okay... just uploaded another version of it. Tell me what you like about it and thanks for the help.

[Nocturnal Emotions]

not bad

for 30 mins

[~'{Night Sky}'~]

good good

I would say this more borderline trance, its not a bad thing.

The Positve:
I can't stress enough how much the meldoy kicks ass. Music HAS to be one of your subjects at school. I love the part where the bass note changes at 0.44 i was atticipating it since the song started and i almost thought u wernt goin to do it. Hmm Definitly trance, its to chilled and spacy to be dance. The ending is good and i also like the deep kick and bass line. Okay here comes the bad ....

The Negitive ;_:
Okay hmm let me think. Some of your samples suck, for example the hihat and snare(2.45). Some of the arps get a little stale at some parts try fading them in and out with cut and res. The Climax (@2.38) is a little weak and a bit dispointing try using stronger arps to build up with the snare.

Overall:
Nice track, somthing a little diffrent(which is good) but definetly room for imporvement. Imporve your skills and tecnique and keep producing. The fact you can write a melody like that proves you have talent.

4/5
8/10

Heres a track i made could you return the favour and review it?(its hard dance)
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419153

[|Lovely|]

mmm summery

The tracks got a nice summery feel to it. Melody is quite nice and so are your sythns.

I agree with the other guy, theres somthing about that kick thats not quite right. I am not really digging the bass either, not the synth its self but the pattern and mabey some slight mastering would'ent do any harm as some parts are to loud. Don't worry its a good, well made track i am just trying to offer some constructive critsim to what i think personally you could improve.

Questions:

1.What Vsti did you use to make the synths
2.How did you do the glichy thing at 0.12
3.Are you using FLstudio or cubase

Overall nice work, keep producing!

9/10
5/5

Heres a hard dance track i made can you drop me a review?
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419153

kirja100 responds:

Thanks for your advice...but unfortunately I can not fix bugs, because all of my projects are deleted: (
I use FLStudio9XXL Producer Edition for creating music, VSTi - Nexus (12 banks), and effect that sounds, it's Gross Beat (VST)
I glad to help you :D
YourSmile
THANK YOU

[Sulfuric Acid]

Lol

I could imgine a mad german raver guy rocking back and forth in a corner out his nut on exctasy.

This song has a kinda sinster creepy feel to it and its freeking me out a bit.
Its kinda catchy in mortal kombat theme song kinda way

5/5
10/10
Heres a song i just uploaded i would appreciate a review if you had moment
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419099

[Havet]

wow

Kinda almost sounds like somthing smashing pumpkings would do

[G4-MegaMix-Dont Lose Me FNL]

Tune

Unfortunley this tracks not long enough. Its very hardstyles in its sound. The melody is what keeps the song going. The kick a little to punchy at some parts. You should extend this song to a full track!

5/5
10/10

Heres a song i just uploaded i would appreciate a review if you had moment
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419099

g4ebguyGT responds:

sounds good on headphones and thanks.

[[Kieda] Left Behind [Prev]]

bass!

The bass line arp thing its self is good its a little to loud its over powering the other synths. The kick is also is not deep enough it a little to high pitched. Apart from that good song ;-)

9/10
5/5

Heres a song i just uploaded i would appreciate a review if you had moment
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419099

Kieda responds:

Thanks, finished this song and noted your feedback on it (: