gavkay21's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kush Demo]

Hmmm ...

Same as the last song. Its a little messy but you've obviously put quite a effort into this.
This is better than the other song anyway and is on the right track. I can tell your influanced by justice? Am i Right?. The dubstep base is all over the place at parts but i think you can fix it with a little more tweaking.

Keep producing and don't be discourged by shitty votes you get.

scottwjsm responds:

yes i still have to do the tweaking,
im influanced by justice and skrillex,
and thanks for leaving a comment

[Hipstro Demo]

Dance X Dubstep

0.43 is where is kicks in and the drop is quite good. Did you mean to cross breed dubstep and dance?. I must adimit its doe sound messy at some parts and mabey a bit reaptive in others. I would break it down around 2.30 and then introduce a strong synth lead meldoy.
hmm kinda like this ....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2DO6Y9 _5e7A

You've proberly heard that song before btw. I like the concept but it needs some tidyng up.
Check this out for me if you want I just uploaded it.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/423075

[Fluted]

well

Meldoy is okay but for gods sake turn down the volume of the flute my ears nearly melted off

AccountableMasses responds:

Well okay... just uploaded another version of it. Tell me what you like about it and thanks for the help.

[Nocturnal Emotions]

not bad

for 30 mins

[~'{Night Sky}'~]

good good

I would say this more borderline trance, its not a bad thing.

The Positve:
I can't stress enough how much the meldoy kicks ass. Music HAS to be one of your subjects at school. I love the part where the bass note changes at 0.44 i was atticipating it since the song started and i almost thought u wernt goin to do it. Hmm Definitly trance, its to chilled and spacy to be dance. The ending is good and i also like the deep kick and bass line. Okay here comes the bad ....

The Negitive ;_:
Okay hmm let me think. Some of your samples suck, for example the hihat and snare(2.45). Some of the arps get a little stale at some parts try fading them in and out with cut and res. The Climax (@2.38) is a little weak and a bit dispointing try using stronger arps to build up with the snare.

Overall:
Nice track, somthing a little diffrent(which is good) but definetly room for imporvement. Imporve your skills and tecnique and keep producing. The fact you can write a melody like that proves you have talent.

4/5
8/10

Heres a track i made could you return the favour and review it?(its hard dance)
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419153

[Sulfuric Acid]

Lol

I could imgine a mad german raver guy rocking back and forth in a corner out his nut on exctasy.

This song has a kinda sinster creepy feel to it and its freeking me out a bit.
Its kinda catchy in mortal kombat theme song kinda way

5/5
10/10
Heres a song i just uploaded i would appreciate a review if you had moment
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419099

[Havet]

wow

Kinda almost sounds like somthing smashing pumpkings would do

[G4-MegaMix-Dont Lose Me FNL]

Tune

Unfortunley this tracks not long enough. Its very hardstyles in its sound. The melody is what keeps the song going. The kick a little to punchy at some parts. You should extend this song to a full track!

5/5
10/10

Heres a song i just uploaded i would appreciate a review if you had moment
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419099

g4ebguyGT responds:

sounds good on headphones and thanks.

[[Kieda] Left Behind [Prev]]

bass!

The bass line arp thing its self is good its a little to loud its over powering the other synths. The kick is also is not deep enough it a little to high pitched. Apart from that good song ;-)

9/10
5/5

Heres a song i just uploaded i would appreciate a review if you had moment
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419099

Kieda responds:

Thanks, finished this song and noted your feedback on it (: