Not bad
This song has good progression and the melody evolves as the track goes on. Okay i gave you nine for a reason and this is why.
1. Some of the percussion is to powerfull for example the snare and the kick. This is a mastering issue its always worth while going over the song few times and fiddling with volumes until everything blends in perfectly, dont worry it takes practice.
2. Some of the synths are a "Cheap" and "Cheesy" sounding i know it cant be hard making good synths. Try adding some slight delay or reverb next time to make it sound more pro.
3. Its not trance more a dance track. I know thats a minor point but i was just making you aware of it. (I did not de-merit you for that btw)
Good work overall just practice mastering and those synths.
-FridayFox
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