gavkay21's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Masq - So Many Wipes]

Wow nice

Very well constructed, i really like. what do you mean by wipe. Hey check out this thread on the bbs it might intrest you http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1 270204 (email him he may sign you!) the part that starts at 2.28 is like a heavy metal dubstep electro riff and it fucking epic! nice job.

~fridayfuax~
Check out my newest uploaded track if you want
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1 270204

jpbear responds:

lol i mean W.I.P. by wipe.
As in work in progress.

Not too interested in getting signed right now, dont have enough of a fanbase, but when i do send a track to various labels ill make sure to send one there ^.^

Heh you messed up your track linking, ill check your profile out in a bit man.

[Under the Surface (FINAL)[?]]

Realy nice

Kinda has hugh epic feel about it

Shoephly responds:

^^

Thanks a lot for the review. And epic was what I was going for. :D

-shoephly

[[LO-RMX] Glancing Back (Cut)]

Sounding really good

I really like the synths you used in this. If i wer you i would consider making the pads louder and fading things in and out. But overall its a really good job you have done

Oakwood responds:

Yeah I've thought about editing the pads. I might redo them if I get picked among the nominees.
Thanks for the advice :)

[PotencY - Trinity Force]

1.10

1.10 is where its happing, your really good at your trance be sure to have look at my new track.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/432522

Mea-Anima responds:

Thanks for the review gavkay.
Sure thing, I will check your song right now.
Stay tuned.

And thanks again ^^

[Kush Demo]

Hmmm ...

Same as the last song. Its a little messy but you've obviously put quite a effort into this.
This is better than the other song anyway and is on the right track. I can tell your influanced by justice? Am i Right?. The dubstep base is all over the place at parts but i think you can fix it with a little more tweaking.

Keep producing and don't be discourged by shitty votes you get.

scottwjsm responds:

yes i still have to do the tweaking,
im influanced by justice and skrillex,
and thanks for leaving a comment

[Fluted]

well

Meldoy is okay but for gods sake turn down the volume of the flute my ears nearly melted off

AccountableMasses responds:

Well okay... just uploaded another version of it. Tell me what you like about it and thanks for the help.

[|Lovely|]

mmm summery

The tracks got a nice summery feel to it. Melody is quite nice and so are your sythns.

I agree with the other guy, theres somthing about that kick thats not quite right. I am not really digging the bass either, not the synth its self but the pattern and mabey some slight mastering would'ent do any harm as some parts are to loud. Don't worry its a good, well made track i am just trying to offer some constructive critsim to what i think personally you could improve.

Questions:

1.What Vsti did you use to make the synths
2.How did you do the glichy thing at 0.12
3.Are you using FLstudio or cubase

Overall nice work, keep producing!

9/10
5/5

Heres a hard dance track i made can you drop me a review?
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419153

kirja100 responds:

Thanks for your advice...but unfortunately I can not fix bugs, because all of my projects are deleted: (
I use FLStudio9XXL Producer Edition for creating music, VSTi - Nexus (12 banks), and effect that sounds, it's Gross Beat (VST)
I glad to help you :D
YourSmile
THANK YOU

[G4-MegaMix-Dont Lose Me FNL]

Tune

Unfortunley this tracks not long enough. Its very hardstyles in its sound. The melody is what keeps the song going. The kick a little to punchy at some parts. You should extend this song to a full track!

5/5
10/10

Heres a song i just uploaded i would appreciate a review if you had moment
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419099

g4ebguyGT responds:

sounds good on headphones and thanks.

[[Kieda] Left Behind [Prev]]

bass!

The bass line arp thing its self is good its a little to loud its over powering the other synths. The kick is also is not deep enough it a little to high pitched. Apart from that good song ;-)

9/10
5/5

Heres a song i just uploaded i would appreciate a review if you had moment
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419099

Kieda responds:

Thanks, finished this song and noted your feedback on it (:

[sPhly - Untz Untz]

good good

I like the melody to this loop. You could proberly do without the snares in some part its makes it sound a little cheap. Apart from that good work.

5/5
10/10

Heres a song i just uploaded i would appreciate a review if you had moment
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419099

Shoephly responds:

thanks for the review man, really appreciate it ^^

thing with this song is that I just did it in one go, didn't think at all about structure n' shit xD, but now that i listen to it again, i totally agree. :D

thanks for the feedback ^^
and ill check it out asap